Bottletop Project

 

Comments

[laurenstasio]

I love the whole composition.. your photographs and drawings, even though they make it more difficult to read (I knew what the phrase was right away though). Amazing to look at, but i guess lacking in functionality.

[Jocelyn]

Nancy,
I am pleased with the level of imagination and depth of image you are using here. Your overall design requires a fair amount of attention to detail as well as mood. My major criticism is that you are using SO many graphics that the individual "word" that the group of images are supposed to point to gets confusing. You have to trust in your audience that we are smarter than you might expect while at the same time, you have to be very specific in how you choose your imagery so we have good cues to work with.

I can tell you did a lot of work here but I wish I saw you more in class than I have.

Jocelyn

[aelx]

true that ↑